I find myself on a track, but it’s just me
on the ground, my left knee
hands behind a white line
there’s a crowd, but no one’s cheering
*BOOM*
My heart’s pounding, pulse pumping
my feet moving… I’m running
now i hear chattering
I see faces, some i know, others i don’t
but they all sit there, watching.
is the wind speaking?
I hear it clearly now, reverberating,
will he finish, he will finish, he can’t finish
but i have to, well, their qualm to tarnish
Now i see hurdles, here and there
i scale here, stumble there
my clothes in tatters, all i hid now laid bare
i need Your help i whispered, my eyes tear
Now, He’s here…
I feel Him ahead, my sides and rear
I’m still running, this time, without fear
hurdles that used to interfere,
suddenly begin to disappear.
This race, i shall finish and finish well
for the end is near.
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What type of race are you running ?.. When you fall, do you get back up or lay there lamenting ?
Do you listen to what people have to say? Do you really need that crowd ? Do you run only when people are looking ?
Ask yourself.
Remember, He’s always there, all you have to do sometimes is whisper.
As we run in 2012, let’s run with Him.
But then, this is what iThink, what do iKnow ?
WOW! Top class, i totally connect to this, makes a whole lot of sense to me! *thumbs up*
Hmm.Well said. We all (yes, you included!) need to read this some times!
Beautiful!!!! i didnt know u cud write like dis . Nice!
Evaezi! Thank you dear. I try to write, I’m glad you like it 🙂
this is so real…gd job
makes sense a lot….
Funto, am proud of you. nice one.
Wow…..Funto ur indeed an inspiration..Keep up the good work. I wuld never stop being proud of you….Waiting for more! GLORRRRRRRRRY.
*sigh*….. Apparently I’m touched by this….. Let’s hope 2012 will allow all of us run with him……funto thumbs up, you try small :p
Funto!! Another classic…..God bless you bro…
nice one dear xx
Nice piece……the third question made sense, “do u only run wen pple r lukin?”
…….like i have always been told, GOD is closer than u think, and u jst comfirmed that sometimes all we have to do is whisper.
I honestly think people should read this just so they are reminded and get back on track.
It’s good
Very inspiring and great blog really picked me up! Im certainly motivated…fierce and love!
Yet another gud one man….keep it up!!!
†̥o think too long about doing a thing often becomes its undoing. Sometimes you just have †̥o take the leap & build Ūя̲̅ wings on the way down….Make a choice now….
Funto nice 1 bro. (1ce again)
Food for thought! Thank you bro!
This!
Inspiring… *sigh*
Thank You for this!
A beautiful piece
nice one dear……..
Niceeee. Gets one thinking.
Nice stuff..keep it up bro (Y)
🙂 as always, nice one dear!! Thank you for this!
Inspiring
Inspiring; really hit my spirit : nice one
Brilliant!!
*saves this* You write so well!!! God bless u.
as always, u did a gr8 job! a beautiful piece and very thought-provoking! two thumbs up! 🙂
I read this when it was yet 2 be completed ,even at that time it sounded realy nice as I read it aloud…it makes so much meaning.. I’m proud 🙂
I read this when it was incomplete,I told you it was good even when it wasn’t finished…. I’m really proud of you:)
so beautiful 🙂
Hmmmm…anoda inspirational poem for 2012….this is really nice (Y) like I wud alwz say ur jus a blessing…*thumbs up*
This is profound.I think so many people could relate to this on so many levels-I kno I do
Yeah suerb one there! e’ll finish the race and finish well we will!!!